M1ke Hunt係一個好風趣嘅作家。(家陣重係咪就唔清楚喇,好耐無見過佢出現囉)另一方面,佢係一個滿腦子只有性嘅正常男人。所以,佢寫嘅故事,通常都係活色生香,同時又令你捧腹大笑。但呢一篇小故事,則有啲唔同。
故事開始,正常男人一個嘅Mike正在公園睇書。偶然下,佢遇上已婚嘅Penny。突然而來嘅大風雨,令佢兩個被困於一棵大樹下。滿身濕透嘅兩人為避雨而前往Mike在附近的家。事情向可以預知,但毫未預備的方向發展,火,已經點起…
M1ke嘅故事通常都會以佢作為大情聖嘅角度,喺奇奇怪怪嘅情況下碰上性感大美人(有時唔止一個),最終發生情欲關係(有時唔止一次)。有時連佢老婆都有份。(!)但今次M1ke嘅表現可以用一反常態形容,盡顯紳士風度。(暈…)由最初Penny同佢互不相識到擦出火花,情節簡單,發展自然。感覺有啲似近年嘅愛情喜劇,不過香艷得多。睇睇下我幾乎以為睇緊Delta嘅作品。係呀,真係寫得咁好。
有時我覺得寫得好嘅甜故真係好睇過電視。M1Ke Hunt嘅故事就一定好睇過師奶劇啦,要男歡女愛有,要枕頭又有,有啲遺憾嘅結局都有,重要畀到讀者想像空間去妄想。(笑
評分:
性感度:十分(火花四濺,性感非常又點到即止,與故事情節緊扣,滿分!)
文筆:九分(有少許不通順,但對故事整體無損。)
故事:九分(稍嫌平鋪直述,但仍精彩,只減一分)
刊載年份:1997年
連結:http://www.asstr.org/~BitBard/forray/m1ke/happen.html
M1ke Hunt was funny (can’t tell now, as we haven’t seen anything from him for ages). He was also always thinking about sex. The stuff he wrote were hilarious, outrageously immoral, and incredibly sexy. “Some Things Just Happen” is one of the exceptions (the sex and fun are still here, though).
We have Mike the red-blood sex hound in a park, reading. He met a nice married woman called Penny, got caught in a thunderstorm with her together, and seek refuge from the rain, first under a tree, then to Mike’s house. There were no planning on seduction, just a moment of tenderness between two person, and then sparks fly in an exciting way.
Mike’s stories are almost always about him being a witty womanizer, getting himself into funny situations and wind up having sex with the ladies involved. Sometimes with his wife as well.(!) But none of that is here. In here, he seemed smitten by Penny. They sure as hell enjoyed their escapade much. The plot is simple enough, yet remind me of movies like “When Harry Met Sally”, without the marriage and keep the sex, thank you very much.
As I always say, good smut can be better than TV. Sometimes, I guess people don’t need intrigue. They don’t need family feud. They don’t need explosions and flashes. I think all they really need are tender moments, if only to rekindle their own moments with their loved ones. Or for those who are by themselves, a reminder that relationships, even as fleeting as this one, is worth pursuing in their lifetimes.
Ah, one more thing: the sex. It was tender, it was juicy, it was fabulous. So unlike Mike’s other works, but as much enjoyable as it can be, among the best of Internet sex stories.
Sex: 10 (Hot and steamy, very nice and smooth escalation to the actual scene. Emotion restraint at the right moment.)
Writing: 9 (Top value writing, one of the best, if not for ASS, then for M1ke’s. Some slight issues on choice of words, but had no effect on readability.)
Story: 9 (Tender, gentle, with a hint of longing. Top notch.)
Year Posted: 1997
Link: http://www.asstr.org/~BitBard/forray/m1ke/happen.html